| | | Just looking for weeds | Mar 2016 | tsukany | 6 | 653 | Wed Mar 30, 2016 5:32 pm by Karen |
| | | Is this just a story in stanzas? | Feb 2016 | tsukany | 4 | 658 | Wed Mar 02, 2016 11:55 am by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Posting early | Jan 2016 | tsukany | 5 | 479 | Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:45 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Checking the logic flow on this one. | Dec 15 | tsukany | 8 | 621 | Mon Jan 04, 2016 5:25 pm by Pat |
| | | Is the comparison clear? | Nov 15 | tsukany | 3 | 613 | Fri Dec 04, 2015 3:23 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Reactions? Does this require more context to be interesting? | Oct 15 | tsukany | 4 | 424 | Thu Oct 29, 2015 6:34 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Questioning a prep or two | Sept 15 | tsukany | 4 | 447 | Sat Sep 26, 2015 7:47 pm by Pat |
| | | Enough assonance? | Aug 15 | tsukany | 4 | 460 | Mon Aug 31, 2015 10:05 pm by Dennis 20 |
| | | A Premee born today | July 15 | tsukany | 4 | 662 | Tue Aug 11, 2015 5:52 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Sorry. This is more than a quick read. What is broken? | June 15 | tsukany | 8 | 588 | Sun Jun 28, 2015 12:51 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | More Likely | May 15 | tsukany | 2 | 477 | Sat May 30, 2015 4:09 pm by Karen |
| | | "minimum of 10 characters" | Apr 15 | tsukany | 4 | 651 | Sun Apr 26, 2015 11:56 am by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Hunting for weeds or worse | Mar 15 | tsukany | 4 | 655 | Sun Mar 29, 2015 4:47 pm by dennis20 |
| | | Long poem but few sentences. | Feb 15 | tsukany | 5 | 492 | Sat Feb 28, 2015 12:58 pm by Karen |
| | | Too little to be interesting? | Jan 15 | tsukany | 4 | 464 | Sat Jan 31, 2015 4:49 pm by Karen |
| | | So fresh the electrons are still moving | Dec 14 | tsukany | 7 | 490 | Mon Dec 22, 2014 3:19 pm by Pat |
| | | Feeling obligated to offer early: | Nov 14 | tsukany | 9 | 663 | Sun Nov 30, 2014 8:26 am by tsukany |
| | | Comments below | Nov 14 | tsukany | 5 | 477 | Mon Nov 24, 2014 12:05 pm by Pat |
| | | Last One In | Oct 14 | tsukany | 3 | 413 | Fri Oct 31, 2014 3:36 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Short and . . . ? | Sept 14 | tsukany | 3 | 451 | Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:08 am by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | A bit premature to post | Aug 14 | tsukany | 6 | 807 | Thu Sep 04, 2014 5:24 pm by Pat |
| | | Working with tone here. | July 14 | tsukany | 10 | 515 | Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:48 pm by Pat |
| | | Looking for redundancies | Jun 14 | tsukany | 4 | 684 | Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:20 pm by Pat |
| | | Looking at a couple lines being "clunky" | May 14 | tsukany | 7 | 492 | Tue Jun 03, 2014 6:11 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | NOTE about formatting | May 14 | tsukany | 0 | 343 | Thu May 29, 2014 7:19 am by tsukany |
| | | Sorry I'm Late. Is the tone too much? | Apr 14 | tsukany | 9 | 500 | Wed Apr 30, 2014 12:15 pm by Admin |
| | | Visitor's Church | Mar 14 | tsukany | 5 | 542 | Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:17 am by Pat |
| | | Got inspired by one of Dewell's emails | Feb 14 | tsukany | 3 | 409 | Sat Mar 01, 2014 8:26 pm by Pat |
| | | Does the title work for you? | Jan 14 | tsukany | 2 | 494 | Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:18 am by Pat |
| | | General Question about Email | Jan 14 | tsukany | 3 | 370 | Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:24 pm by Admin |
| | | Does the tense remain consistent? Comfortable with the title? | Dec 13 | tsukany | 3 | 456 | Sun Dec 29, 2013 4:31 pm by Pat |
| | | Do there need to be so many scenes? | Nov 13 | tsukany | 5 | 553 | Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:21 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Shortie . . . 'cept for meaning | Nov 13 | tsukany | 10 | 591 | Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:06 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Is there too much information? I think there's enough "poetic" language/diction. Agree? | Oct 2013 | tsukany | 9 | 563 | Wed Oct 30, 2013 11:42 am by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Pretty rough. I am not sure there's enough connecting information | Sept 2013 | tsukany | 9 | 725 | Fri Oct 04, 2013 2:22 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Does this invite the reader into the poem? | Aug 2013 | tsukany | 3 | 418 | Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:57 pm by dennis20 |
| | | Not sure of the title and there's a couple lines that need TLC | July 2013 | tsukany | 5 | 409 | Tue Jul 30, 2013 8:24 am by Pat |
| | | Title still applicable? | June 2013 | tsukany | 3 | 398 | Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:13 pm by Pat |
| | | WORD formatting | May 2013 | tsukany | 3 | 759 | Sun Jun 02, 2013 2:38 pm by Pat |
| | | Seems like I need to change one word to bring this together. Agree? | May 2013 | tsukany | 3 | 411 | Sat Jun 01, 2013 10:16 pm by Pat |
| | | What do you think needs to be fixed? | April 2013 | tsukany | 8 | 858 | Tue Apr 30, 2013 5:29 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Testing the Alert/Notification feature | April 2013 | tsukany | 4 | 523 | Sat Apr 27, 2013 10:32 am by tsukany |
| | | Tis the season for short offerings. :) | Mar 2013 | tsukany | 2 | 410 | Thu Mar 28, 2013 3:56 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Are the images connecting? | Feb 2013 | tsukany | 3 | 503 | Fri Mar 01, 2013 8:48 pm by Pat |
| | | Happy New Year! Is there enough information in this to make you care at all? | Jan 2013 | tsukany | 5 | 441 | Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:39 am by tsukany |
| | | Did I overload the sounds in such a short poem? | Dec 2012 | tsukany | 7 | 602 | Mon Dec 31, 2012 8:14 am by Pat |
| | | This is too fresh but I want it to sing. Would it be too long to add more detail to image three? | Nov 2012 | tsukany | 3 | 552 | Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:51 pm by dennis20 |
| | | I need help discovering the unclear areas in this offering. HELP! | Oct Poems | tsukany | 3 | 436 | Wed Oct 31, 2012 2:15 pm by Pat |
| | | Is the Persona clear? | Sept Poems | tsukany | 4 | 476 | Sat Oct 06, 2012 10:20 am by dennis20 |
| | | Hoping the jump from the title is not too far. | Aug Poems | tsukany | 5 | 775 | Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:51 pm by WhitneyC |